sábado, 4 de septiembre de 2010

Introductory essay

Three important aspects in my life


Do you want to know something else about me? Probably at this point in my life at the university, you just know some characteristics about me like I have a boyfriend, that I am responsible, easygoing, my likes and dislikes but, do you really know the three aspects that I consider important in my life?

The first important aspect in my life is my family. I think that family is the basis of society. However, my family is the support of my life, if something goes wrong with it, I feel insecure and sad. On the other hand, if everything is ok with my family, I feel that everything is perfect around me. I love my family because they give me the strength, the and the love that I need to succeed.

Another important aspect in my life is school since it is the basis of my education. I consider important to have the necessary tools in knowledge to defend our beliefs in order to achieve what we want. In my opinion, studying makes us rational people and that is what our society needs to keep going on. Moreover, at school I have found special people and some of them had become my best friends.

As I mentioned before I found good friends at school, and they are the last but not the least important aspect in my life. Friendship is an special value in my life since it gives me the opportunity to know new people not only physically but sentimentally, discovering their way of thinking. My friends have a special place in my life because they are a great company for me and they have given me their support on the good and bad moments.

To sump up, my family, friends and school are the support of my life. None of these aspects are more important than the others. They are linked because if one of them fails the other ones become weak. That is way I always try to maintain a balance, so I will spend that much time and effort to be better in each of these important issues for me.

2 comentarios:

  1. Chio, you wrote an amazing introductory paragraph, I cannot find another hook as deeper as yours. Actually, if I haven’t met you, I would even read your essay. The essay begins with some interesting points and you gradually bring that information in your paragraphs.

    I could find any mistakes related to grammar or something related, I just found that you pressed an extra keyboard key, it was in the last paragraph in the first line “To sump up”

    I like your essay, and I am not being hypocrite, I really like your introductory essay, keep working in it, you are doing it very good =)

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  2. hi chio! I really like your essay, the introduction was very good and what can I say about the body? It is amazing...I can say that if I never meet you face to face with the description of this essay I may have an idea about who are you, I liked your conclusion because you summarize all your essay and it is related with the introduction...congratulations...you are doing it very good.. and simple to understand..

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